it hides, elusive and longed (tanka) - POW - 11/17/07
where is sleep? restless mind wanders heavy steps across scapes of craggy thoughts, decay beleaguered and so forlorn the dreams, shadowy, on the run
View ArticleRe: it hides, elusive and longed (tanka) - POW - 11/17/07
Ah, that is a great question that any victims of insomnia would love to know the answer for sure. Much well done, Llorha
View ArticleRe: it hides, elusive and longed (tanka) - POW - 11/17/07
it does leave the victim lethargic and pleading - lack of sleep, the lack of dreams, tends to make one a bit punchy thanks so much for reading Mir Lorrha
View ArticleRe: it hides, elusive and longed (tanka) - POW - 11/17/07
You've packed so many sublime images into these five lines, llorha. I know about those shadowy dreams; lack of sleep always makes me spacey. *smile* Ok, more so than usual! Congratulations on your...
View ArticleRe: it hides, elusive and longed (tanka) - POW - 11/17/07
thanks so much for reading Rick! sleep depravation really really sucks. it pretty much not only destroys one's mental faculties it wrecks havoc upon the physical as well. *hugz* lorrha
View ArticleRe: it hides, elusive and longed (tanka) - POW - 11/17/07
Wow you have truly captured some deep emotions here An outstanding write and I am so glad to see that it has been Recognized!!! Bravo and congratulation an the well deserved Honor dear Llorha
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